A great start--except the magazine's name was On Your Own. To say the reader was taking it more personally than we imagined would be an understatement. And of course, we were addressing millions, but she was thinking purely of herself. She'd internalized the message and reflected it in her language.
In Is this my interface or yours? John Saito of Dropbox dives deeper into that issue in a thoughtful look at what it means today. He works through what the "my" perspective means, as well as the "your" perspective, then turns to what might seem like the easy change: no perspective, as in when Windows changed the label "My Computer" to just "Computer." He notes:
Unfortunately, cutting out “my” or “your” doesn’t work 100% of the time. Sometimes you really do need to differentiate the user’s stuff from someone else’s stuff. For example, in YouTube, you can’t just say “Channel,” because it’s not clear whether that’s referring to your channel, channels that you’ve subscribed to, or channels that YouTube is recommending to you.If you haven't taken the time to think through why you label things "your" or "my" -- be it a blog post, an app interface, or a sign -- this is a thoughtful read to pass around and discuss with your team.
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